2015 term 4 precise nouns.

 This week in writing we have been using precise nouns to make our writing more specific for the reader.

We took a paragraph and changed the nouns from general nouns to precise nouns.

Here is an example.

In the weekend I had to do lots of shopping with my Mum. We went to the shop diary to get some food. We also went to look for a present for my cousin’s birthday. I had to choose between a doll and a soft toy. After that we went to the shop to buy some clothes, I got two new items and a pair of shoes. Because I had been so good, mum took me to the shop to buy an ice block. Lucky me!

rugby world cup

WALT recount an event in just 4 sentences.

Yesterday we wrote a recount about the Rugby World Cup because the All Blacks won!

Keeping our safe

WALT to be cyber smart when we are online.
I learn about keeping our safe on online.

Camp imovies

This was at camp.This is also a imovie.

Student Conferences

This week we are having student conferences where we share our learning with our families. Here are my goals for term 3.

Join some ideas using conjunctions such as: when, while, after, since, until, if, because, although, thatCheck I have used a balance of names and pronouns and that the reader knows which character I am referring toAdd prefixes and suffixes to build new words  Apply spelling rules in my writing.

the aimasing

the amsing teachers wen because 

 they no how to play cats the boll

the kids lost the netball was

it was wonederfull  today we lost because the teachers wen . 

My inquiry

Wonderful MERC

Today we drove to MERC to see where we will go to camp next term.

We saw trees for climbing, we saw a rock climbing wall. We looked the room we will sleep in. The beds are bunk beds. We looked at where will be shower and go to the toilet. There are three showers for the boys and three showers for the girls.

We met the chef who will cook us food when we are on camp.

We looked at the boats we will go sailing on.

We saw the bow and arrows we will use for archery.

We saw the giants ladder that we have to climb up.

After we looked around MERC we went and had a play in the playground. My favourite part was playing on the climbing web and playing on the swing.

Climbing to be safe from the monster on the ground.

In the kitchen.